How I changed my story

My basic concept remained the same throughout the process, and wasn't really changed by the peer reviews. The main thing that changed was dialogue, and at the request of my peers I made it more confrontational and less internal conflict. I love writing about internal conflict, so it was difficult to get away from. I also worked hard to make my dialogue seem more natural, which was hard because this is not a usual situation that has expected responses. The final thing I changed from what I started with was to add an unexpected ending, which I don't think I executed as well as I could of because it was a last minute change. In the future I need to make more believable characters, which is something I struggle with because I like the idea of the fantastic and absurd.